Wednesday, July 20, 2011

Thank you, thank you very much.

Every Wednesday I participate in the Indie Ink Writing ChallengeThis week I challenged K. Syrah, and Carrie challenged me with: 'Pick your favorite Elvis song and write a 500 word story using the lyrics as inspiration.


As an awkward kid who hadn't yet figured out how to handle his body, I was capable of doing two things really well: the Elvis lip curl and his well-known phrase of, ‘Thank you, thank you very much.’ You know the one that the ladies supposedly would swoon over and that only a select few can pull off? Granted, I could only achieve it when I was alone and in my bathroom in front of the mirror, but hey, to me that still counted.

Even though most of my friends never actually listened to Elvis, it was the cool thing to try and do at recess. We would all sit in a circle in the large grassy field, looking at each other and screwing our faces up, hoping that maybe, just maybe, one of us would pull it off in front of someone so we could be considered the coolest kid ever.

One day, after sitting in front of the mirror for hours the previous night, I decided at recess that I would tell everyone that I had perfected it: I was totally capable of doing the Elvis lip curl and sounding exactly like him.

Everyone stopped scrunching up their faces and focused completely on me, and me alone. No one was practicing their lip curl, no one was trying to perfect the tone of their voice; all eyes were on me and this was going to be the best glory moment of my young life.

Not one of us in the group had ever made such a big deal as I. Most of the time the other kids would say, ‘I’m getting a little closer! Can you tell? Can you?’ But me, being the cocky person that I am, straight up said, ‘Hey guys, I can totally do the lip curl and sound like Elvis, it’s like the easiest thing in the world. You seriously can’t? Ha!’

And honestly, in front of the mirror I could! I would reach into the little throat of mine and out would come the growly voice of the King himself and my lip would curl in the most perfect of ways that, had the King still been alive, would have made him jealous.

But in front of a group of friends where I was already the ‘loser’ of the group? Ya, it was a little harder.

So I sat there, with my butt getting damp from the green grass, with all eyes on me. I tried to block everyone from my view. I tried to imagine them naked or in their underwear. Heck, I even tried to imagine them in granny panties complete with a wig! But it didn’t work. I attempted the lip curl and my face completely froze up. NOTHING. And that deep growly voice that was supposed to come out didn’t show itself. Instead, a tiny squeak emitted from my throat. My glory moment was officially ruined and after that day I never tried to channel my inner Elvis again.

So, funny story: When Vince and I were talking about music for our wedding last week, I said that my only rule would be NO ELVIS. I don't know why I don't really like his music, but I just don't. I know, I'm probably the only person in the world, but I can't help it! So imagine my surprise when my prompt was about none other than Elvis himself. And it had to be 500 words. (Which I got exactly right!) I was a little worried that my writing would be crap, and I was actually dreading it! I guess that's where the word 'challenge' comes in...

I know I didn't follow the prompt to a 'T' because I was supposed to choose a song as inspiration, and I instead chose to use the phrase after his songs, but I had a lot of fun writing this. It isn't exactly a story from my childhood, but as a kid I did always try to perfect that little trademarks of Elvis'!

17 comments:

  1. A story with a moral ... nice!

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  2. Elvis stage fright! 

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  3. We’re legends in our own minds… till we’re not. Well done!

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  4. I think you did a great job tackling the challenge. And while my first ever record (cough cough yes I said record - I was one) was of Elvis, I am not a fan either.

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  5. That's a pretty tough challenge! I do like your interpretation on it, though!
    I always find it hard to write a younger voice and I think it came through in your piece! 

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  6. That was good, I'm not sure I would do as well with that challenge. =]

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  7. Hey, you did great!! Better than I ever would have! I'm not an Elvis fan either (oh the horror!! LOL).

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  8. I think you did a wonderful job. It's okay if you don't follow your prompt completely, sometimes a fantastic piece of writing comes out because you didn't restrict yourself too much. Fact of the matter is you did GREAT!

    See you in the 'Indie' next week!

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  9. I'm definitely not an Elvis fan either, although bits of him have followed me throughout my life.

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  10. This is actually a really funny story! Nice job. :)

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  11. LOL, sorry I made you write about something you disliked so much :) I think you did a great job with the prompt though!

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  12. Thank you all for such great feedback!! It makes me smile. =D

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  13. Don't apologize, it's a good think! It made me think about stuff from a different angle and I actually enjoyed it!!

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  14. Very nicely done, darlin'.  The tinge of sadness that I felt at the end offered a very nice extra dimension to the humour of this story.~

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